Idir and the Three Dates – a Poem
a hiabun poem
Introduction:
This haibun introduces Idir, desert memory, and a mythic moment of longing in a brief prose-poetic form.
Idir and the three dates poem
Idir stands with his hand out, holding three little dates from the golden date tree. He rushes the broken-down bus, singing a song his father taught him. His singing drips with desert moonlight—the same light that once lit his Koran in the deep, holy, infant night, when his father told him stories about dervishes mad with divine love and fantastical creatures that drink from that same brightness.
The dates are a gift for a woman—she who has constellations in her eyes and dreams of Cairo eighty years ago, when rich merchants made lavish promises and the latest Parisian fashions drifted through the markets. In those stories, strange magicians came down from the mountains to grant young women their wishes, placing new flowers in earth-red bowls filled with silver-clean water.
Promises of love. Promises of lovemaking. And tears on the faces of lovers overcome by the divine madness of an Other singing to an Other in a tongue known only to two beloveds.
A moonlit night
She opens her dress.
A moth flutters against a windowpane.
A haibun is a Japanese literary form that combines short prose with a closing haiku or brief poem. The prose is often reflective, travel-based, or dreamlike, while the final poem offers a moment of clarity—something distilled, visual, and immediate. Modern haibun often blend memoir, travel writing, meditation, or surreal imagery, while still honoring the traditional structure of prose followed by a haiku. Because of this mix of narrative and lyric compression, many writers use the haibun form to explore memory, place, and transformation.
This haibun blends desert memory and Sufi longing, offering an example of prose and verse woven together. In this haibun, Idir carries three dates and a moonlit song as myth, desire, and divine madness meet in a moment of intimate transformation.


